Feedback and progress of the Edit

For our first feedback meeting, we did not have a rough cut to present due to the group and individual schedules of the group. Although from the footage we got from the raw footage and test shot edits was very helpful for our final cut. The feedback given was to use enough cutaways to break up the shot of the interviewee talking but to make sure the cutaways are relevant to the subject the interviewee is talking about. We also had feedback stating we should follow the a narrative path on introducing each interviewees with a story to a soft subject to introduce the speaker to the audience then to push the narrative to the main subject of the documentary, Lack of and discrimination of female artists in the tattoo industry. 

In regards to the editing process, The editing started late into production and was edited over a week with a collective time of 28 hours. Natalie Clarke did all the editing with little help of the rest of the group other then technical help and fresh eyes on the direction of the narrative. All of the feedback was taken into account and during the editing process Natalie catered the documentary as best she could with the feedback, transcript and initial ideas for the production.

Please see Natalie’s Blog HERE. 

CLARKE,Natalie(2016)Editing [online] Last updated 1st march.
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